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This year for the Challenge, I'm posting snippets from a story.
If you'd like to read the whole tale, please start with A.
M IS FOR MONOPOLY
"When I was little, I had a monster in my closet too." Danielle rubbed the girl's back and didn't protest as Libby leaned against her.
Libby wiped at her cheeks, sniffling. "What did you do? Did someone come save you too?"
"Nope, no one. My parents wouldn't believe me. My brothers made fun of me. But the monster was real." Danielle ran her hands through Libby's blond locks, brushing them back from her face. "I would stay up all night with a flashlight pointed at the closet. To stay awake, I'd play Monopoly. I rolled the dice on my blankets so no one could hear them. I was always the dog. My brothers used to fight over the race car, but I loved the dog."
"I've never played that game," Libby said. Her voice was soft, but there were no more tears.
"Kids these days don't play it anymore. You have cool video games." Danielle gave the girl a little smile. "But one night, I fell asleep and the light went out. No one can stay up all night all the time. The monster came out and pinned me down on the game board with one big paw. It was going to eat me. I knew it. Its mouth was huge.
"I started kicking and screaming. I wasn't going to end up in a monster's belly. Then my hands started to glow, and the little dog yelled at me to kill the monster. Well, if my dog said I could do it, I was going to do it." Danielle made a slicing motion with her hand. "I killed it. Just like that."
"But I can't kill the monsters." Libby's lower lip trembled.
"That's all right. You have me to kill them for you." Danielle hugged the child. Tight.
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Wahoo! I love Monopoly! Such great memories from childhood :)
ReplyDeleteGive me Monopoly over video games any day! ;)
ReplyDeleteAlso, love learning some of Danielle's back-story here. Libby's lucky to have someone to help her since Danielle didn't!
Hey, it was nice to read this "origin story" about Fenn. I love Monopoly. Whenever my family play it, it does tend to take all night!
ReplyDeleteIs that where Fenn came from? Very cool.
ReplyDeleteleave it to you to weave an old favorite into your story--i love how you did that!
ReplyDeleteMonopoly is great and a very cool way to integrate it into your story.
ReplyDeleteEspecially about the dog :)
Left and Write
Loved this! I used to play Monopoly all the time as a kid. Can't wait to get my kids into it!
ReplyDelete<3 That so so sweet. Danielle acts like she's tough as nails, but you can tell she really cares for Libby. I love how and why Fenn took the form of the dog from Monopoly ... speaking of, such a great game; I might play with Oldest this weekend.
ReplyDeleteThank you, everyone! Monopoly was one of my favorites as a kid too. Have a great Monday.
ReplyDeleteAh, okay, so Fenn is the Monopoly dog? That gives me a better mental picture.
ReplyDeleteAnd thanks to you & W4WS for all your support!
~M
I always wanted to be the dog in Monopoly too! So this is Fenn's beginning? Love it.
ReplyDeleteW4WS has been fun so far! :)
Monopoly is a lot of fun. I enjoy both the original board game, and the new xbox version :)
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We love Monopoly here! Great excerpt!
ReplyDeleteYou gotta kill off the monsters; that's for sure. Nice scene.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the reminder about W4WS. I've done a few posts and will do more later!
O loved Monopoly as a kid--played it for hours. My kids love it too!
ReplyDeleteMonsters...always makes me think of the childs book...can't think of the name, but can see the cover where the monster was afraid of the kid.
ReplyDeleteA-Z
Yay for M. and E.J. It was obviously initials month :)
ReplyDeleteI admire all you've accomplished in this scene. It's touching and informative and interesting.
Aww... I love story time. We always end up learning the hard way, but I'm glad she learned her powers (:
ReplyDeleteAww. That's kind of sweet.
ReplyDeleteSonia Lal
I always lost at Monopoly. They're changing the pieces now, you know? No more iron.
ReplyDeleteI think, at some point in our lives, most all of us has need of a monster slayer.
ReplyDeleteI like how you incorporated Monopoly into this.
ReplyDeleteI was wondering how did she meet Fenn.
ReplyDeleteNever played Monopoly but there is a game very similar to that here.
That's too cool.
ReplyDeleteHeather