Sunday, July 31, 2011

Sitting in the creek

I'm over halfway done with my third revision. It's going smoothly this time. No problem with deciding how I want to separate it into chapters. I think I will be adding a lot to the ending, though. There's little details that I mentioned in the meat of the story that need to be addressed at the end. I also have a tentative title: A Lion's Heart. I'm not wild about it. I would be willing to change it if the publisher wants to do so. Yet I like how it can be taken a couple of ways.

It's been a busy weekend. I'm trying to get all the errands and housework done before we leave for Gen Con on Thursday morning. Yet we did have a lovely afternoon at McCormick's Creek yesterday.
(My son laughing as he sits in a little waterfall in the creek.
He's so dang adorable!)

2 comments:

  1. Glad you know how you want to divide your chapters. As hot as it is here, I'd gladly sit in that creek.

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  2. Aww! Brandon's so cute.

    I'm glad the chapter thing went well, and I think it's a great idea to expand upon the ending. :)

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