1302 - The Alpha
One run in the woods wouldn't matter. Stefanie Porter had been cooped up for months in her apartment. The wolf within her needed to stretch her legs and play under the moon. Her wolf obviously didn't have very good instincts, because her pack found her. They almost catch her too, but a mysterious lone wolf jumps in to help Stefanie escape.
The pack continues to hunt her in the city. They're driven by their cruel Alpha, Wyatt. He refuses to give Stefanie her freedom even after she lost the challenge to lead the pack and left their territory. She's strong, an Alpha herself, and he wants her for his mate. There's no one to stop him from doing that through any means necessary either.
Stefanie can hide in her apartment, or she can try to convince the lone wolf to teach her some of his unusual tricks. James Roberts might be a bit geeky, but he's smart and looks hot when the argyle sweater comes off. He has ambitions to be a superhero, and it might be admirable if Wyatt couldn't rip him limb from limb.
With the pack scouring the city for her, Stefanie must learn what James has to teach her before Wyatt finds her, and she has to fight not only for her life, but the lone wolf's as well.
(This blurb will likely be tweaked several times!)
This one has been so much fun to write. It's a twist on the typical paranormal romance where the strong woman falls for an Alpha male. In my story, Stefanie is the Alpha and James is not. I love having her as the aggressive one, taking charge, and making the first move.
This story is also my homage to geeky men. I love geeks! Intelligence, obscure comic book references, and a nice set of dice turn me on more than big muscles and an overbearing attitude.
Sounds awesome!!
ReplyDeleteLiking the twist!
ReplyDeleteI went to Urban dictionary. The closest references I could get to your 'dice' comment was either...ejaculation...or crack.
ReplyDeletehmmm. I'm thinking neither was your intent.
you talk about each character several times, back and forth in your draft blurb. I recommend you tweak to separate them. I bit confusing, and diminishes impact the way it is.
-Have a great day.
Can't wait to read this one! Just need to finish up NaNo first. :)
ReplyDeleteI stay away from the Urban Dictionary. Its always gotten me into trouble and I end up saying stupid things.
ReplyDeleteI saw this on your CP's blog. I love it! Can't wait to read it!!
ReplyDeleteNothing wrong with geeks! ;)
ReplyDeleteThe book sounds awesome!
you amaze me with how much you read and write! you must have a maid!
ReplyDeleteway to go!
Geeks are cool!
ReplyDeleteSounds very cool. I'm already hooked on the marquis!
ReplyDeleteCan't wait!
ReplyDeleteExcellent!
ReplyDeleteOoo! That is a fun twist. I look forward to reading that.
ReplyDeleteThank you all! I'm excited for this story.
ReplyDeleteAs for dice, I was actually meaning the dice you use in table top role-playing and board games. No secret meaning there!
Very cool... enjoying this story very much.
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