Tuesday, April 17, 2012

A to Z Challenge - O is for Obscene

This is part of one story through the month of April.
If you're just joining me now, please start with A is for Abby.

O IS FOR OBSCENE

Abby couldn't sit at the table any longer. Demetrius had all the subtlety of a rampaging ox. Yet for all his dramatic gestures and cliched lines, Myrtle Burrows was enthralled.

Excusing herself to go to the bathroom, Abby breathed out a sigh of relief when she entered the cafe's empty restroom. One of the lights flickered making a soft sizzling sound. She had expected to do all the questioning of Burrows, but the other woman would barely look her way. The fact her hands had glowed when she first met Burrows threw her off, but she hadn't meant for Demetrius to take it all over.

She sat down first of the two stalls. Abby hated seeing him behaving like that with another woman. She hated herself for feeling that way. She knew he was only acting. Besides, he made it clear he wanted her and she had turned him down. It was her own doing.

When Burrows met them in the cafe, Abby's hands didn't glow. She even shook the author's hand. Nothing.
It didn't make sense. The light flickered again and made her jump when it popped. Dark shadows settled in the stall with her. Only the single light over the entry door remained.

Abby shook her head and stood up. She should get back to the others. She was sure the answer was with Burrows. She walked to the sink and frowned as she saw her hands glow.

Looking up into the mirror, a hideous melted face grinned at her from the darkness in the far corner before it leapt at her. Abby didn't have time to scream as she whirled around, dropped low, and let her blades slide out. She slashed at the monster, but it flew up and over to rebound off the wall and come for her again.

She hissed with the pain in her ankle as she twisted and stood, holding her ground against the thing. It laughed lowly; the sound seemingly coming from all around her. A trick for amateurs.

Abby crossed her blades, and when the monster was near enough, she used them like scissors to cut through its skinny neck. The grotesque face fell to the right, but from within the ragged black robes, a second beast kept coming at her. It was like an obscene version of Russian nesting dolls.

It slammed into her chest and Abby fell back onto the tiled floor. She kicked up, sending it sailing to smack against the wall. She threw one sword pin it there, lancing it through one of the empty eye sockets. Abby was ready for the third monster when it launched itself out of the second's robes.

Standing and slipping on the floor, her swing missed and the thing grabbed her wrist with a bony hand. It smashed her hand against the sink, but couldn't force Abby to drop her sword.

"You're mine now. What a tasty meal you'll make." Its voice was a dry rattle, but its teeth didn't look old and brittle. Its mouth yawned, opening wider to impossible angles. 

The blade disappeared from the wall and emerged from Abby's free hand.

"I'm not on the menu." She jammed the blade up under the monster's chin and out the top of its head. No more came forth as it sank into a black mass onto the floor.

26 comments:

  1. ARGH! Good thing Abby's so strong or those monsters would have finished her!

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    1. Good thing her blades can do that little trick too!

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  2. Won't Demetrius be surprised when he finds out what happened? (And that he missed the action.)

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  3. Wow, Abby sure puts up a fight! Great post.:)

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  4. she is someone not to mess one--i bet word gets around!

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  5. Ha! Abby is a master...great fight scene. Obviously the Big D was of no help at all. Where's a hero when you need one??? No need - Abby is a kick-ass hero on her own!

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    1. Thanks! And yes, Abby is quite capable, but back-up is always nice.

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  6. Quite an action packed "O" day!

    Lucy

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  7. Just checkin' in for some catch up.

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  8. Monsters nested inside each other? Creepy!


    The Golden Eagle
    The Eagle's Aerial Perspective

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    1. I always thought Russian nesting dolls were a bit creepy!

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  9. Abby's such a badass, I totally love her! I nearly jumped when the monster showed up in the mirror. Awesome chapter!

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  10. That is AWESOME! Love it. Greetings from a fellow blogger.

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  11. Ooo, awesome monster that Abby just slayed.

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  12. I like how it's voice rattled. :) Hmm, now you have me wondering why her hands glowed the first time she met the author.

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    1. Bwuhahaha! It will be revealed... eventually. ;)

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  13. You write action sequences really well! I followed along perfectly. I love where this is going

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